. But sometimes that's not a bad thing, some fans like to hear things that fit in the "normal". You should work on getting more words out there, convey all your feelings(It's Deathcore so common attributes like heart-break,Angst,parents).Also You repeat alot and to people that could become really annoying.Unless you're going for new-wave Djenty stuff, then I think it's ok to repeat, since the riffs often do. 
| miniradman says :
Do you have anything that's a little more higher quality? |
