Hey man, I wasn't able to listen to your whole video (I'm in a hotel and the internet cuts in and out, but from what I hear it sounds like you've got something going for you. The only thing really lacking is hook riffs to bring the song together. Listen to a song like Phobophile by
Cryptopsy to see what I mean. Anyway, you have some weird and interesting stuff going on that was enjoyable to listen to, and I can say you're a lot better than a lot of poop bands that are trying to pass themselves off as
Brutal nowadays. Also, try working on a unique sound of your own as you progress. Good luck!
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