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k chapter 3: part 1 (note this is the final chapter ive written so far, school work is such a drag)
Chapter 3
Gabriel
As my mortal life had once ended so swiftly, my new life sprung upon me with immediate haste.
The Darkness I awoke in swallowed me whole into its lustful sinful depths, never wanting to release me.
My eyes shot open, my body craving the crimson
Elixir of life that now no longer flowed through my veins. I yearned to be free, to feast on flesh and
Blood, but I could not break free of the shackles that kept me tied to this bed. I flexed my muscles, trying to unleash the new
Inhuman strength that they now possessed. Straining to cast off these chains I tried one more time and then gave up all hope.
“There, there my sweet,” a soft sweet
Voice crooned to me “you will soon be
Unleashed unto the world, we have to wait for your mind to take control of your inner
Demon so to speak”
I looked around and saw a woman, standing in the doorway a look of amusement painted across her face as she watched my futile efforts to
Escape this room and feed for eternity. From her looks passers by would have said she was in her early 20s, yet I knew this was a lie. She was like me; a
Demon, a vampyre.
Her name was Dianna, named after the goddess of the moon and stars, her features as radiant and beautiful as the name bespoke. Her hair long and black, hanging
Down past her shoulders as straight as
Razor blades, her eyes dark red, like
Blood soaked rubies hung in a skeletal case. Those lips that I craved the attention of as red as rose petals, behind which were teeth as sharp but delicate as the very
Thorns of the alluring rose that now stood before me. She skipped over to the side of my bed, which was my cage, and leaned her
Head on my chest, as if to feel the warmth of my body that would never radiate
Again, to listen to my
Heart that would be forever still and cold.
“Soon we will leave this house and hunt, together, as a pack, Dianna whispered softly into my ear, “and I will teach you how to move, how to think and how to be, a vampire. We are the top of the food chain in this
Desolate Wasteland barren of all pure beings with souls of
Angel white.”
My fallen
Angel lay atop me, her arms wrapped around my body, our two
Cold, hard, unfeeling bodies merged together as one. I tried to hold Dianna but my arms were shackled
Down hard to the sides of the bed. She noticed my movements and as gracefully as a feline she reached
Down to either side of me and undid the chains holding me down.
“I have placed my
Trust in your judgement here Gabriel, my darling, you can now easily overpower me and feast on mortal souls
Until The End of times”
The predator within roared loudly for my brain to command this simple
Action, the
Thirst grew stronger and more potent but yet I remained still, my body only moving to wrap my arms around Dianna and hold her close while we kissed deeply.
“Yes, you are ready my love. We will venture
Out when night takes the day, when the
Danger of sunlight is raped by
The Sweet touch of the
Moonlight on our skin”
As night came about, and wolves howled
Out in the dark forests on the mainland, we fled our prison cell and emerged into the misted streets of Inclementia, our own little island of love and death. We ran
Down the streets, the grace that I had gained also astounded me as mist swirled around me and streetlights seemed to bend past my very form. We stopped outside the docklands, the waves crashing against the rotting wood frames of the piers and mooring areas.
"Your first lesson my sweet destroyer is to learn how to sense your
Prey, but it is more difficult than just smelling a mortal and ravaging their flesh, you have to smell the impurities of their very soul. This is how I have hunted the last century and how I had been taught to hunt "
“Our laws permit the killing of mortals who have sinned and thrown their life away, so to speak we are the scavengers of tarnished souls. Take a deep breath in through your mouth then your nose and try to filter out any sins and misdoings that have been committed”
I took a step forwards and sucked in deeply through my mouth like Dianna had told me. It filled with the taste of salted sea air yet there was some other scent lurking in the midst of the salty, wet air, a strong smell trying in desperation to remain cloaked in the sea. It had the same taste as strong wine that has been fermenting over a long period of time.
As I released the air from my mouth, I drew another in through my nose, inhaling deep and hard. As soon as the air entered my nostrils, it hit me. The smell was now the more potent of the two scents in the air. It had a deep aroma, sweet and rich, a taste that I craved and lusted for, the beast inside growled in triumph as it savoured what was to come. For this new taste was that of mortal blood and as Dianna had said, this corrupted mortal was a lot more distinct than that of typical denizen of this badly used neighbourhood surrounding the decrepit dockyards.
I'm coming to Kill you, won't leave until you die.
Murder born of Vengeance
.Good job! 
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