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Monday 13 April 2009 - 20:25:04
You'll probably start writing Again some day, don't worry.

Monday 13 April 2009 - 20:42:49

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Agnostica says : I had this school project on stalactites and stalagmites and had to do smth artistic on them. Here's what came out in the middle of the night, which apparently NoNe of my classmates understood:The Scarlet Gardens

Spread through,
deep Down the Earth,
east west south and north
There are secret Scarlet gardens
which have made their way through the years.
They are made of tears, 
flesh and spirit of mother nature
They shall be the edge of Darkness,
they are Gaia’s creatures.
Home of mankind once they were, 
then forgotten, left Forlorn
In Silence they remain, 
don’t fear, they feel no Pain
Need no light to be, 
their beauty not anyone can see, 
but if you love obscurity 
they’ll show you the might of being free!




There's lovely imagery and flow, I like it!

Monday 13 April 2009 - 21:55:15
Happy you like it!

Tuesday 21 April 2009 - 15:45:07
Nice, but it seems like you were in a hurry to close it.But you say its not finished..

Tuesday 21 April 2009 - 18:20:45
It's not, no. I've to change the last stanza. I'll re-post when it's done.

Tuesday 21 April 2009 - 19:47:01
0  , you are right, it still seems like something is missing...

Tuesday 21 April 2009 - 19:50:43
I guess I'm just not able to write at the minute. *shrugs*

Tuesday 21 April 2009 - 20:09:39
Maybe throwing them away, understanding the vanity of the situation...... 0  something like that.....

Tuesday 21 April 2009 - 20:39:16
The teeth are my secrets; I can't get rid of them.

Thursday 23 April 2009 - 23:55:20
Fuck Puerto Ricans.
They are my current disease.
Leave me alone now.

Side note: Seriously, I dont know whats worse. Hanging Out with the Puerto Rican Reservists here or being in Iraq. They are so annoying! ARGH!